The Discovery
Once there was a scientist who decided to make bionic humans. He made a family of four and gave each of them a name, Yokensheer, Shabree, Zafire and Josh. The scientist made them obey his orders and he gave each of them a special power. Yokensheer got super speed, Shabree was really smart, Zafire got to be really strong and Josh got molecular telekinesis, which is the ability to move things with his mind. The scientist made them discover new life forms called dragons.
They went to Africa in a plane and they landed in the rain forest.
“What do we do now?” Yokensheer asked Shabree.
“The map says if we get through this forest then we will find the Mountain of no Return,” Shabree answered.
“Awesome!” exclaimed Zafire.
“Let’s hurry up!” said Josh.
It took them a long time to get there. Finally they made it out of the forest and to the Mountain of no Return.
“Watch out,” said Shabree. “There are a lot of traps that we should avoid.”
“You should stay in the front, Zafire, because you can move things that are heavy,” said Shabree.
Zafire went to the front of the line and they entered a tunnel in the base of the Mountain of No Return. When they got to the top, they met someone named Deynamis.
He said, “You will have to watch out on your journey. There is somebody named Cestrato who wants to destroy every living thing.”
There were many traps, like wass made out of steel. If the travelers didn’t do what the map said it wouldn’t be easy to get back on track.
Bob Johnson • Nov 1, 2013 at 9:19 am
Great work Jaden. Its so good to read your impressive story. Imagination is a precious gift use it often and it will continue to grow. Keep up to the good work my young cousin.
Bob
Ron Johnson • Oct 31, 2013 at 1:18 pm
Good work Jaden! And, I see you wisely left it open for a sequel.
Great Aunt Carol • Oct 31, 2013 at 10:50 am
Jaden, this reads like the beginning of a good book or movie script. Very impressive. It is fun to create from your imagination.
Sharon E. Davis • Oct 31, 2013 at 10:09 am
Jaden loves to write and from a very early age liked to read. He regales me with his writing and reading. It brightens my days when he shares them with me. I’m very proud of him, and look forward to seeing how he uses his gifts and skills in the future. Thanks St. Roberts for an atmosphere of learning and growing. Grandma Sharon
Jaden's Mom • Oct 29, 2013 at 5:52 pm
I am so happy Jaden’s story was featured ! He has always had a wonderful imagination.
He has advanced writing skills, and look forward to more stories.
Jacelynn Bailey
Mrs. Yannett • Oct 29, 2013 at 11:56 am
We are so proud of Jaden Gamwo’s writing, and pleased to be represented by him in this wonderful newspaper!